Bryan's Hideout
The Only Place I Can Be Myself

The frozen heart

By Bryan
Well....never imagined myself posting again in 2 hours time.... =\

Here's a story....

the Snow is melting,
And on that very day,
She left him...
Tho the snow is melting,
His heart freezes...
once a happy guy,
crumbles to earth,
shattering to pieces....
He threw away his emotions,
leaving only "sadness" behind,
All he ever did,
is crying himself to sleep.
Unlike previously,
where they will chat till dawn.
Now,he stays awake till dawn,
just to wait for her call.
Just like the snow,
She faded away,
distancing herself from him,
Never to return again.
He kept on waiting,
Thinking that one day,
he will find her heart,
Once again.

(wrote by janice)
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(my continuation)

Eons passed,
she never returned.
Devastated,
He continued to wait.
he knew that,
a certain day will come,
where she will contact him again.
all he wanted to say,
is 2 simple sentences.
Thank you and Sorry.
truthfully,
One day,
he finally received a message.
A simple message it is,
Yet,
to him,
it's a treasure.
it's his world.
He now knew,
she forgave him.
Again he gave himself hope,
thinking that they will be together again.
he forwarded many meaningful messages.
he continued to wait,
till a day,
where he was exhausted,
not physically,
but mentally.
Reevaluating his actions,
all he sees are self-pitying.
And on that fateful day,
he decided to look no more at the ground,
and to aim for the sky.
Sending her a last message,
he bid her farewell,
farewell to his first love,
his sweet dream.
The snow is falling now,
but bit by bit,
his frozen heart is melting,
and one day,
surely a day will come,
an angel will lift him up,
to his sky.
and he will,
once again,
dance happily around the snow.
 

2 comments so far.

  1. Jerry March 3, 2009 at 12:51 AM
    wow... pro lar... can write poem wan.. i wan learn and call u as sifu can???
  2. Bryan March 3, 2009 at 9:46 PM
    haha...simply write onli la... XD
    stil haven reach sifu level...
    u be my sifu la... =D
    teach me hw to pawn fountain without whosyourdaddy mode... XD

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